The Irken With The Wires- redone chapter 1it had been many years since Dib had last seen Zim. he was 21 now, and was in college. over time he'd forgotten about the invader, as just like the irken himself, his memory faded into nothing but an old blur of his childhood sometimes stirred up by certain smells or sounds. a feeling from long ago that awoke in his subconscious when he smelled rain or heard the blast of a laser on TV. Dib was on his way home, driving his new car down the short-cut he'd discovered yesterday. by driving along the road that sliced through the woods, he could get home faster than if he'd taken the one that twirled around around the city. trees whooshed past him as he drove by, blending into a single blurry mass. there was no one else on this road, and it was rarely patrolled, so he figured he could do a little fast driving. he was enjoying the feeling of the speed when something green launched itself in front of his car. Dib flinched and gave out a startled shout, slamming his foot unto the br
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